This is my final travel before I can get home to my children and wife. I
should hurry up buying presents though, so that I don't get home without
presents. Today and everyday have been very hectic. I run around being
nice and serving food. At about eleven in the evening I can go to bed
after helping the cook with the dishes. I really don't like serving
people which are not nice to me but I have to do it or else I don't get
any money. I share sleeping room with the cook Hugo. He snarls and talks
in his sleep but mostly I am to tired to recognize it. I really miss my
family so as fast that I can run I will hurry home. I try to be nice to
everybody but sometimes when they even won't give me a small tip I get
mad, but of course I can't show i am angry on them so I just smile and
walk away.
Some
days are harder than other days, this day everyone was shouting for
food and I had to run around getting payed and deliver food. There was
even one person, Ms Hubbard that wouldn't give me any tip until her
daughter convinced her. I had no time to even think on looking after
murderers. One time I even had to work harder cause Emily was just
talking to one of the conductors and not working. I got so mad so I went
and talked to the cook and he got Emily back to work. After a long
evening about ten o'clock I stumbled to my cabin to get some rest, I was
so tired after the days work I fell asleep directly. I had to drag
myself up eight in the morning to serve breakfast.
I thought and thought of who it could be and in the end I think I got an answer in my head so I went to the conductor Pierre to talk about it, this is what I thought.
Someone dressed out as a conductor, the false conductor locket the safe
up and let
Ms Hubbard in, Ms Hubbard shot Mr Ratchet and then cleaned
the gun. She heard someone comming so she left the coach, just to make
everyone think she didn’t shoot him she stabbed him three times in the
chest, right where she shot him. The cleaner is from the gun and Ms
Hubbard wouldn't have the strength to kill a man with a knife, the gun
was easier. The storm hid the sound of a gun firing and cause she is
quite old she uses a flintlock pistol and the flintlock pistol needs to
be cleaned or else it will not work. Then the question is, who was the
fake conductor, maybe when he locked up the door Ms Hubbard grabbed the
person and talked to him of something so the button fell off. The person
has to be someone that has access to a lot of key locks, maybe a
masterkey and the person could maybe have gotten the dress from another
train conductor in another train, so the person is traveling much and
have access to a master key. Maybe Ms Hubbard got some exercise in French
and the other person maybe is good on other languages. Ms Hubbard knows
a flintlock pistol is worth much and puts it back in the bag instead of
throwing it away. In the other peoples texts Mr Ratchet dies about six hours
later than I say Mr Ratchet gets shot, well Mr Rachet took some
sleeping pills which lowers his heart rate so he slowly bleeded to
death. And you couldn’t find any bullets cause you don't look for
bullets in a knife wound. The bullet didn’t go through the body cause Ms
Hubbard had taken a bitt less powder. Ms Hubbard says that it has been a
burgulary in her room just to make her look innocent. The other person with the keys could be one of the conductors, payed to lock up the room and no one would suspect the conductor since he is in charge of the train. He could have picked up an extra suit at a station, just to make a decoy and ofcourse the conductor has all the keys for the rooms. If I am not wrong Luis has an love affair with Emily and he maybe wants to do something special, like go on a trip so maybe he needed the money that Ms Hubbard offered him.
When I was finished Pierre just started to laught at me cause he thought the plot was way to hard for even an evil mastermind to figure out. He went away cause he had to talk to the cook but I kept standing for myself thinking if the story was dumb. I walked away thinking that the story was not so dump but I didn't risked to talk to anybody else about it.
The next day I went to talk to Ms Swansson about what I thought. Right after I had told her about my story she flew up and started looking after bullets in Ratchet, they got found immediently and the pipe cleaner was for a gun and not a pipe. When Ms Swansson was going to Ms Hubbard cabin to ask her out she heard a loud gunshot, it came from where I was sitting so she ran back. I was sitting in a chair just waiting for the answer when Ms Hubbard came out of the toilet and pointed a gun against me. She shot and everything went black. While I was uncontious I knew that Pierre was the helper and he had told Ms Hubbard I was on her tracks, so Ms Hubbard tried to wipe me away. I woke up at a hospital and told exactly what happened. Ms Hubbard didn't make any resistance when she was arrested cause she is quite old. A person on the train told me that Pierre ran away right after the gunshot. I'm sure he didn't want anybody to get shot so I didn't told the police where he ran away. In a couple of weeks with resting and being with my family I got back to work but from that day I am always wearing a small chainmaile piece against bullet. I never found out why Ms Hubbard murdered Mr Ratchet cause the police said it was secret information.
In this blog you meet fictional passengers who describe their experiences on a made-up journey with the Taurus Express.
Etiketter
- Colonel George Arthur (3)
- Conductor Luis Henry (3)
- Countess Helena André (2)
- Cyrus Hardman (5)
- Dr Constantine (3)
- Edward Masterman (3)
- Emily Landrake (4)
- Greta Ohlsson (3)
- Hector MacQueen (4)
- Hildegard schimdt (4)
- Hugo Pitcher (4)
- Lily Blake (2)
- M Bouc (3)
- Maid Sue Watson (4)
- Maid Wendy Lewis (3)
- Marco Foscarelli (3)
- Mary Debenham (3)
- Miss Swanson (2)
- Mrs Harriet Hubbard (4)
- Mrs Laura Smith (1)
- Peter Smith (2)
- Pierre Michel (3)
- Princess Nathalia Mirnoff (3)
- Robert Janson (5)
- Samuel Ratchett (4)
- Waitress Sarah Walker (3)
tisdag 29 januari 2013
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Your voki is a very nice, it really looks like a waiter. Your witnes report is telling a lot of what "you" was doing , and you have a good pronunciation. Your story is also good, its easy to follow but I think you should tell more about how "you" feel and what you sees and stuff. If you do that it will be much more interesting to read it, you will picture the story in your head. Also you change tenses between the first and the last part. The part where you tell what "you" think the murder happened is very good. One more thing you can think of when you're writing is that it sounds better (at least I think so) if you write 'was not' to 'wasn't' and 'are not' to 'aren't'.
SvaraRaderaAs a whole, everything was great! :)
Thanks for the feedback :)
Radera