onsdag 23 januari 2013

1st part of my story


I Don’t really know who the killer is but i have some thoughts. I think the conductor is the killer. I’am not sure but i think it is him because he has keys to almost all the doors on the train adn he can easy sneak in to a room and stab someone, then he can sneak out and lock the door and no one would know anything.

2 kommentarer:

  1. En bra början på din berättelse. Du motiverade och det var jättebra! Men tänk på att alltid använda storbokstav på "I", i början så skrev du med liten bokstav en gång. ;) Om du ändrar det så blir det perfekt! :)

    SvaraRadera